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Wicked Witch of the East
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0 posted 2000-01-10 06:24 PM



I was a wishin'
To go a fishin'
Got me a pole,
Away I stole,
Down to the crick'
Ran in a lick,
Found me a worm,
And did he squirm,
Worm felt the hook,
Gave me a look,
I said to him,
It's sink or swim,
He swam,
Damn,
My hook was bare,
Worm was not there,
Lost my bait,
Getting late,
No fishin'
No wishin'
No worm,
No squirm,
He swam,
Damn.

© Copyright 2000 Wicked Witch of the East - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 2000-01-10 07:18 PM


LOLLOL!

Great, or should I say, tragic picture you have here!



Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-10 07:24 PM


Geeze...this must be a good poem, 'cause now I want to go fishing....and I don't go fishing!!!  

 Denise


Nan
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3 posted 2000-01-10 09:41 PM


Gone Fishin' - AyeUpp!!



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-01-10 09:47 PM


Wicked,
Funny read, enjoyed.

CrazyChick
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5 posted 2000-01-10 09:48 PM


Great poem!!!   I love to fish, it's so relaxing!!!
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6 posted 2000-01-10 09:50 PM


Doesn't happen often ....
this one's got me giggling.
Really precious !
LOL !
I like it very much.
~*Marge*~

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-01-11 08:21 AM


ROFL...in all reality, dispite it's humor, this is an extreamly well written poem  
Martie
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9 posted 2000-01-11 02:58 PM


Fisnin is like a journey, it's not the destination that's important, it's the ride.

  Great poem!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Meadowmuse
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10 posted 2000-01-11 03:09 PM


Clever, clever worm! (and poet!) Thanks for the grin. (I needed it!)

Dear LadyClaire



Andrew Scott
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11 posted 2000-01-12 01:05 AM


Hey Wicked One... It be Monkey Boy... Ya got to quit fishin' in the 'Stute's fish bowl cause I understand the Nurse be dumpin' seds into the water.  And how be Ian, that dog European? Hope nobody has tried to grill that pup.

Well, time to head back to the cell.  See ya around the 'Stute.

Wicked Witch of the East
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12 posted 2000-01-12 06:48 PM


Andrew my pretty.... hehehe...
it tweren't the stute fishbowl I be a fishin in....  
I thought I had caught me a carp... turned out to be Cratchet.. had to throw her back...
too boney....
Ian is always by my side...  still trying to figure what type of European dog he might be...  maybe a weienerschnitzel....
see ya round the stute....  beware of the hook in Cratchets mouth...

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