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patchoulipumpkin
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0 posted 2000-01-10 04:33 PM


Me too

Have you ever been underwater
Holding your breath for so long
That you think you’re going to burst
But just before you do
You pull for the surface
And at what seems like the last minute
You take in a breath.
So that you think you have saved yourself
From drowning

Have you?

Yeh, me too!



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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-01-10 05:52 PM


Patch,
I've done that but its been quite a while ago.
Enjoyed the read.

Severn
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3 posted 2000-01-10 05:56 PM


Once or twice - though I used to have a dreadful dream about being in a pool that suddenly got covered over by polythene - THAT was awful!

Well done - like your style.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-10 11:16 PM


Yep, I've done that too, but like, Sy, it was many years ago!

Horrible nightmare, Severn! Scarey!

 Denise


Quiet Lightning
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5 posted 2000-01-10 11:27 PM


I'd stay in the shallow water so I wouldn't drown.Plus I can swim.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-01-10 11:30 PM


Patch -
Definitely ....
and hasn't been that long ago !
LOL !  Nice to know we're
all a little nuts !

SEYMOUR ????? YOU????
Go figure !

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