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patchoulipumpkin
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0 posted 01-10-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for patchoulipumpkin   Email patchoulipumpkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for patchoulipumpkin

Me too

Have you ever been underwater
Holding your breath for so long
That you think you’re going to burst
But just before you do
You pull for the surface
And at what seems like the last minute
You take in a breath.
So that you think you have saved yourself
From drowning

Have you?

Yeh, me too!


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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 01-10-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Patch,
I've done that but its been quite a while ago.
Enjoyed the read.
Severn
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3 posted 01-10-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Once or twice - though I used to have a dreadful dream about being in a pool that suddenly got covered over by polythene - THAT was awful!

Well done - like your style.
Denise
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4 posted 01-10-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, I've done that too, but like, Sy, it was many years ago!

Horrible nightmare, Severn! Scarey!

 Denise

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5 posted 01-10-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

I'd stay in the shallow water so I wouldn't drown.Plus I can swim.
Marge Tindal
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Patch -
Definitely ....
and hasn't been that long ago !
LOL !  Nice to know we're
all a little nuts !

SEYMOUR ????? YOU????
Go figure !
 
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