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Parker
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Shadows                            
-------                            
                                    
Darkness grows each new day        
the numbing never goes away        
lurking in my deepest thoughts      
I want to run but I can not        
                                    
Coming from down in my soul        
causing pain wherever it goes      
sinking teeth at any time          
ebbing life away from mine          
                                    
I would fight if I knew how        
I can see them coming now            
not even the power from above      
can stop the shadows of your love.  
                                    
James (PARKER) Haley 011392


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Severn
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1 posted 01-10-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Shadows indeed - and this is quite chilling - well done.

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Denise
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2 posted 01-10-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well done, James. You made me feel the pain of what it must be like.

 Denise

whiskey
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James, those shadows I have felt and seen , one day at a time , look forward  
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4 posted 01-10-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James -

Nicely done.
~*Marge*~
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-10-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

HALEYJA,
One day at a time, nice line. Enjoyed the read.
SnglDad
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6 posted 01-10-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Nice job and very strong.Thanx for sharing


 God Bless

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 01-11-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"not even the power from above      
can stop the shadows of your love. "

Nice  
                                    
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Thanks Severn, Denise, whiskey, Marge, Seymour, SnglDad and Hoot_owl....
those shadows are gone now, just sweet memories.

James (Parker)
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