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~A Smile Of Love~

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Gary
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0 posted 01-10-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for Gary   Email Gary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gary

~A Smile Of Love~

The cold wind cuts through me, as i walk to where you live,
The heart inside me beats like a thousand drums.
My nerves twitch with anxiety,
Each step i take becomes faster.
I see the light that shines from your window,
It bekons me to enter.
The gate has the same old squeek,
As i make my way up your path.
Anxious moments as my hand reaches to knock on your door,
Then before i realize, you are there.
A smile of love and a vision of beauty..
Im home.
© Copyright 2000 Gary Marshall - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 01-10-2000 05:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Gary this is lovely, I enjoyed the read  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 01-10-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nice work Gary, enjoyed the read.
Severn
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This is lovely, Gary...very tender
Denise
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This is beautiful, Gary! Home is where the love is!

 Denise

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I also like this ..
kind of sneaked up on me.
I don't mind that at all !
~*Marge*~
kitkat
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6 posted 01-11-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Very nice gary-nothing like the feeling of home.  kitkat
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 01-11-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Home is certainly special, that warm sense of belonging..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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