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Some control
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Some control |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some control I can't control or make someone else's choices, that couldn't possibly be. The woman I Love chose to leave me one day desiring to be set free from me. Wish I had been less critical and treated her better day by day, then I still could be loving her as special as she was, cause she probably would have Loved to stay. She would have remained my wife and my friend, my sweetheart and my lover in everyway. So in some degree it appears I do have some control over another, when I choose to treat them with love and respect or I choose to be a cad, You can pick your hearts desire, soft and good or hard and bad. I believe Love should be freely given, many times it has made me happy and glad. And I hope and pray you will never see the day when misused love takes your lover away. Surely I know, I have some control, when I choose to treat those I Love either good or bad. jameslee@June1994 |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This it sad, and true, we do have control. enjoyed the read  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Dark Angel for reading and commenting about my poem. James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
James - so much wisdom about hindsight - and only time teaches it. Well done poem. K '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sad but true , Great poem James well done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wow ! Great lesson you've learned. Nicely put. ~*Marge*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A lesson hard learned. Some things in life have a very high price tag. Great poem, James. Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Severn, whiskey, Marge, and Denise for your nice comments. Denise I have to agree with you it was a very high price for me to pay and I hope I never have to go thru something like that again. Hopefully I have learned some lessons I'll remember for a lifetime. James |
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