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The Dream.

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-10-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

The Dream.


Tonight and every night
In my dreams you'll play
Shining within the light
Of my mind's gateway

You stand there still
And beckon me to come
Using the power and will
Of your angelic Wisdom

Childlike, you take my hand
And whisk me through the sky
To the stars, the moon and
You teach my soul to fly

I swoop and I turn
And I laugh out loud with glee
Then suddenly come to learn
That you have left me….

Alone.

Until tomorrow night
Once more you'll come to play
Shining within the light
Of my mind's gateway.


Dark Angel.







 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Mike
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1 posted 01-10-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I enjoyed.
hoot_owl_rn
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It's sometimes amazing how we can do anything in our dreams  
PhaerieChild
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3 posted 01-10-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Love the imagery in this. Very good read and boy...do I want some dreams like that!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Denise
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4 posted 01-10-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like a wonderful dream! Lovely poem, Dark Angel!

 Denise

Gary
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5 posted 01-10-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Gary   Email Gary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gary

"Lovely, i really enjoyed this"  
Parker
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6 posted 01-10-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Dark... wonderful poem, it reminds of nights I've awoke and just had to fall asleep quickly to get back to my dream.

Parker
Severn
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7 posted 01-10-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dark - this is a wonderful capturing of where a dream can take us - and how it can leave us. Wonderful my friend!

K
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Very nice  
Kinda reminds me of Peter Pan.
May all your dreams be pleasant ones.
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9 posted 01-10-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Great imagery! But I fly only in my dreams! Heights frighten me!  
Elizabeth Santos
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Dark Angel,
Are you sure these are dreams and not those flocks of birds you wrote about? Hmmmm
This was lovely
Liz
Dark Angel
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11 posted 01-11-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you my friends, for your lovely comments. I appreciate them.  

Elizabeth, wow you remembered my flock of birds  poem   thats kewl thanks!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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12 posted 01-11-2000 04:22 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Soul-sib, this one set me back a bit. 'Tis not your usual style and it is very well done . I am glad you directed me to it.  

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


Moonshine
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This is simply beautiful DA - you have captured the wonderful dream-like feeling that you write about, makes me feel whisked away in the dream also. Well done.
First__Knight
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Smiles of delight when I read this....Thoughts of freedom and flying....What true dreams...thank you

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL

Marta
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15 posted 01-11-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for Marta   Email Marta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marta

Until tomorrow night
Once more you'll come to play
Shining within the light
Of my mind's gateway.

Love the way you ended.

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 01-11-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

This chaser of dreams really liked this one.
~*Marge*~
Dark Angel
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Soul-bro, thank you for you lovely reply and the lovely compliment.  
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Moonshine, thanks hon, I am glad that it makes you feel whisked away  
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Fk, glad it made you smile   thank you so much!
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marta, thank you so much  
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Marge, glad you liked it!!  


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


whiskey
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18 posted 01-11-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is wonderful Angel, It made me remember what its like believing when your a child , I liked it alot  
HelmutB
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Nice read there...tanks
Flows nicely with my dream

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

RainbowGirl
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20 posted 01-11-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: WOW!!!!...Stunning!

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Quiet Lightning
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I liked how you said gateway to get to your dreams.
Gemini
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22 posted 01-11-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

I liked your poem. If only I could have dreams like this!
Skyfyre
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23 posted 01-11-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Thus is the way of pseudo-reality; sometimes the dreams are more real than the reality, are they not?

Lovely verse.

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Majestic
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24 posted 01-12-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

excellent poem DA...(excuse me ...my bed calleth...hehe)

Life is a dream, lest ye dare to live it!
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