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Colors of February

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Elizabeth Santos
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Colors of February

The month of February is divine
For everything is colored shades of red
My heart is colored red of valentine

He whispered to this lonely heart of mine
I memorized the loving words he said
"The month of February is divine"

To prove his love he sent this lovely line
With single velvet rose of crimson red
"My heart is colored red of valentine"

He whispered as he sipped my glass of wine
And laid a velvet rose across my bed
"The month of February is divine"

But when he left the sun would cease to shine
I couldn't forget the haunting words he said
"My heart is colored red of valentine"

Though many years have slowly passed in time
I still recall the rose of crimson red
The month of February is divine
My heart is colored red of valentine

Elizabeth Santos



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Pepper
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"With single velvet rose of crimson red  My heart is colored red of valentine"

Gorgeous poem Liz....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Mike
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Enjoyed very much.
hoot_owl_rn
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Smiling...okay show off!! Liz, I find your knack for poetry simply amazing...you go girl!!!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-10-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Pepper, You are a romantic - I knew it!
Thanks,
Liz

Mike, You are too
Liz

Hoot,
You make me laugh.
Not everyone will recognize this
Liz
PhaerieChild
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What a beautiful piece!! This really is romantic...I love Valentines and velvet roses. Wonderful read!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Denise
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6 posted 01-10-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hey Elizabeth! I have a challenge for you! How about a villanelle for every month of the year! hehehehehe....I know you can do it!  No pressure....that's only one per month! (You could probably do it in a day or two!) Very beautiful, as usual, Elizabeth!

 Denise

Severn
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7 posted 01-10-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I wouldn't have recognised it!

Tchtch - is there anything you can't do?!

Wonderful again, Liz...

K
Elizabeth Santos
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Wildchild
Glad you enjoyed this
Liz

Denise,
I accept your challenge
Thanks, blue eyes
Liz
 
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