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CrazyChick
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0 posted 01-10-2000 03:07 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick

           Goodbye

I am invisible to you
You don't even know i exist

I told you that i loved you..
You walked away

I kissed you...
You turned the other cheak

I gave you my heart...
But you didn't take it.

So now i'm taking it back
Were it is safe
Were it belongs

No longer will i let you be the cause of my pain
or the reasons for my tears

No longer will i watch you turn your back
and walk away from me

***Goodbye***
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devina
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1 posted 01-10-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I'll have to say been there and done that..hang in there girl...the right one may be just around the next corner!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 01-10-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lots of feelings packed into this one...he's not deserving of you  
Severn
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3 posted 01-10-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

How truly sad...have a hug and a   from me...

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SnglDad
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4 posted 01-10-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Boy do I feel sorry for him. He has lost a very sweet Young lady.Some people have no idea what they have or had until they`ve lost it. HIS LOSS
Great poem and good luck

 God Bless

whiskey
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5 posted 01-10-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I have been there, Dont worry its his loss your a wonderful person and if he cant return your love then there will be someone who will   Hugs
Denise
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6 posted 01-10-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sometimes, Goodbye, is the only thing you can say. Great poem!  

 Denise

CrazyChick
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7 posted 01-10-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you everyone!!!!!
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