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The day we met

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tulip
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0 posted 01-10-2000 02:29 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I know I'm a dreamer
for I believe all is possible.
But the day I met you
there was a connection unlike anything I've ever experienced.

We've talked since then,
about that day.
We became friends immediately, and then..
We held one another, kissed,
You agreed our instantaneous "friendship"
was different than the rest.

I looked in your eyes,
and I saw something there, between us.
The passion we have is unreal.

But you are pulling away from me.
I see you slipping.
I don't want to loose you, and I've told you so.
You tell me what we have is real,
but the timing is wrong.
But you can't "plan" for things like this...

I know that if it's meant to be
It will happen..
So I'm letting you go.
We'll see if you come back...

© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
CrazyChick
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1 posted 01-10-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Beautiful poem!!!    sometimes its better to let go!!!

~~~if you love something, set it free
if it comes back to you, its your,
if it doesn't, it never was~~~

i don't know who wrote this   but one of my friends gave me this poem after a breakup.
cokey_95
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2 posted 01-10-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for cokey_95   Email cokey_95   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cokey_95

I  am going thru this right now..nothing tuffer then letting go except the waiting to see if they come back!!!!!
devina
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3 posted 01-10-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I think your doing the right thing, no matter how hard letting go is, if it's meant to be it will always come back to you(I think that's something like the old saying goes?)  So hang in there and have faith in fate!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-10-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well, I truly belive in the old saying  
tulip
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5 posted 01-10-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I hope it works!
Severn
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6 posted 01-10-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Tulip - you are very brave and I hope it works for you - for it is the hardest thing to do.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
tulip
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7 posted 01-11-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

We'll see how long I can wait...
Denise
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8 posted 01-11-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

All you can do is let him go...if he comes back, it was meant to be. I wouldn't recommend waiting around, though. Go on with your life. If you meet and fall in love with someone else, then that is what was meant to be. Great poem, Tulip!

 Denise

tulip
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9 posted 01-11-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

You're absolutely right, Dsnyder!  Thanks!
Skyfyre
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10 posted 01-12-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Good ending on this one.  Good decision too.  

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

tulip
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11 posted 01-15-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I know it's the only thing I CAN do.
Rus Bowden
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12 posted 01-16-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

hi tulip,

wait till it's seems wrong to wait anymore.  tough to go through...  enjoyed your poem.

rus
amber
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13 posted 01-16-2000 02:05 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

Trust me on this one tulip, i know from expierence that its true that if you let something go, and its ment to be, it will come back to you. I proved it with the love of my life, sometimes when you love someone enough to let them go, it proves your love more, than holding on when the time isnt right. BEautiful poem. And i know how hard that feeling of slipping away is, you feel helpless and ask yourself a thousand times what more can you do. I have been there.
tulip
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14 posted 01-16-2000 11:53 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thanks Amber & rus, for your words of wisdom.  We'll see what happens!
 
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