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amber
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0 posted 01-10-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

Memories that I look back on,
meant so much to my heart,
but now I wish them all away,
forgotten, torn apart.

Friends that used to hold my soul,
No longer know my name,
I wrap my emotions inside myself,
And hang my head in shame.

I let thier words seep inside,
Of these walls that I've built,
A mistake that I'll never forget,
Hiding all this misplaced guilt.

Memories that used to make me smile,
Now they bring disgust,
That I was nieve enough to feel,
Ignorant enough to trust.

Looking into their eyes I see,
That everything has changed,
To many bridges have been burned,
To travel back agian.

To the times of simplicity,
That I kept inside my mind,
And cherished until this day,
Will all be left behind.

[This message has been edited by amber (edited 01-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
cokey_95
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1 posted 01-10-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for cokey_95   Email cokey_95   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cokey_95

OK wow did you jump in my brain for a few min there...excellent work
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2 posted 01-10-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thanks so much for your time, I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem.
CrazyChick
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3 posted 01-10-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

You did a great job writting this poem....i totally understand how you feel.
devina
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4 posted 01-10-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

My dear sister, I think you and I should get a big ummm.... .BAT- and go cleaning!!!!  No- but seriously I think you know how much better you are than those little girls...they're not even worth your time.  Their problem is that you're so beautiful, and the'll never be able to compete with your mind or your spirit...Much Sisterly Love!!!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 01-10-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sometimes bridges can be rebuilt, and other times they're better off left burnt.
amber
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7 posted 01-11-2000 06:01 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all for your comments. And Keeper, there is so much going on its hard to think about, and sometimes i know from my own mother, your childrens words can run very deep. Sometimes i have to take the time to make sure that my heart is really where im looking from and not just my imagination.

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8 posted 01-11-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Some bridges are best left burnt, but don't ever stop having a trusting heart! Not every one out there is a jerk! Great poem!

 Denise

 
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