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Love at First Sight

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Unknown Poet
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0 posted 01-10-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Unknown Poet   Email Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Unknown Poet


Love at First Sight

I saw her one day as if seeing her for the first time
Her hair was down and she was looking fine

I froze in my steps, my eyes locked on her
Everything around me just became a blur

She was walking right towards me
Her beautiful eyes all I could see

She saw me looking and gave me a wink
She froze me even more for I couldn't blink

She finally walked past me and gave me a look
I was able to get my strength back that she had took

We soon became friends and talked every day
Everytime her lips moved, I felt myself slipping away

We were soon talking every chance that we got
For after awhile my shyness I forgot

I finally got the courage to put my arm around her
And I noticed a faint smile as she got closer

Then we both drew away for we were only friends
But I have a feeling that we'll connect ends


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Pepper
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1 posted 01-10-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is simply lovely UP....and I hope that you do connect...sounds like you have a great beginning to build on...
Welcome to Passions....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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3 posted 01-10-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've written an awful sweet poem, and what a gentleman!!G*  Now I say grab her, kiss her, and make her yours!!!! Good Luck, and hope that all goes well!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Severn
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4 posted 01-10-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Your confidence is refreshing...good luck!
And a good poem.

SnglDad
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5 posted 01-10-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

A great poem indeed,im not so sure that I`d take all of the advice that has been givin.
Keep up the good work and good luck  
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6 posted 01-10-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sweet, hopeful poem!  

 Denise

Unknown Poet
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7 posted 01-10-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Unknown Poet   Email Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Unknown Poet

Thanks everyone! This is my second poem posted and it's doing well!!! Oh and a little message for The Keeper: The extra extra dry champagne helped man thanks!!!
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 01-11-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

LOL @ champagne...

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

 
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