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quicksilver girl
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0 posted 01-07-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for quicksilver girl   Email quicksilver girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quicksilver girl

     sitting on a grey vinyl seat
    staring into the
    multicolored sky.
    Red burns into
    Orangy yellow
    fades
    into a marine green
    melting through to blue
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Sounds like a beautiful view!  

 Denise

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Been to California and know exactly what you are talking about. Beautiful poem!
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Moving this to open! Please check your email!
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Very descriptive - nicely done!

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Nice, Quicksilver Girl -
very nice indeed.
~*Marge*~
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A lot said in very few words  
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Save me a seat!
 
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