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cokey_95
Junior Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 35


0 posted 2000-01-09 06:25 PM



A touch..i have never felt before...except in my
heart, who knew a whole relationship could be based
on words alone..speaking from the heart..
not with alterior motives..just to say i love
you,dont ask me how, i just do, i fell in love with..
the person you are not, the shell you are in.
to have a love so completly filling that by
a simple word...or a sigh and not even having
to speak and knowing what it is that you think!
Knowing that even if you never get to be with
this person..your life is so much better for what they
brought to it..a love so pure that grows so much every
day..you think if you love anymore you will burst..
then comes the words you have longed to hear,
since you spoke last...I love you my sweet,
and then you are head over heels in way to deep.
If you knew what you do to me when you whisper
in my ear i love you baby, 4 small words bring my
whole life to a screeching halt, my heart races,
i feel my face get hot and i realize that this
person.. whom i love.. really does love me in
return...a pure love that i have never felt before, but
one feeling that i can say i would love to spend the
rest of my life feeling....the feeling knowing you are
right beside me holding my hand and my heart and
knowing i can trust you completly with both of them.

© Copyright 2000 Karin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-09 08:36 PM


Sounds like love to me, Cokey!  

 Denise


Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2000-01-09 10:25 PM


Such a passionate and appealing poem--ain't love grand!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-01-09 11:40 PM


Heart throbing poem!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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