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A Symphony ( My 5000 Post!)

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Denise
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0 posted 01-09-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise


Your finely crafted verses play a tune
And splash across the canvas of my mind
A picturesque fair wood or sandy dune
Iíve seen the world through phrases youíve designed.

Your pen has caused my tears to freely flow
Cascading falls from sorrows that you share
And wisdom gleaned, on me, you do bestow
You gift my soul because you truly care.

A healing balm Iíve found in clever wit
My burdened heart set free once more to fly
Aloft again in ever graceful flit
Your gentle words, the breeze that lifts me high.

A symphony you softly play for me
Upon the page when you write poetry.

(This is dedicated to all the poets and readers of Passions in Poetry, for making this the best place I have ever found, with a special note of thanks to Ron for making this all possible!)



 Denise

© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


1 posted 01-09-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Excellent, my sweet Denise
And with me you have a perminant lease.
I read your poems with every look
And hope some day you'll write a book.
*L* Sy
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
Posts 1115
Wyoming


2 posted 01-09-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Denise, Congratulations on #5000!    However, you are one of the maestros that lead this symphony.  Your work is always so beautifully done.  Thank you.
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


3 posted 01-09-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Oh thank you too dsynder. Yor are excellent poet and a beautiful woman. The other day, I printed out all my poem and responses on the computer and realized that you responded to my work than anbody else and I'm very grateful of that. In fact you was there for me when my first poem was showcased on this board.  I used to be dissapointed when I had so few posts but your name was always among those posts and I thank you. One day, I might dedicate a poem to you and your wonderful poems.

 Nathan
Martie
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4 posted 01-09-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I too appreciate the many times you have read and commented on my poetry.  You open friendship's door so easily and reply with care and style and your own poetry is inspiring.  Congratulations!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 01-09-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady D... An excellent post for #5000 or for any number in fact.  Thanks for heaping a fair share upon my own posts. Always a joy to see your name and always a pleasure to read. To 10K and beyond. (and me yet to break a thousand...   )
Andrew Scott
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6 posted 01-09-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Hey! Wait a minute! When did I break a thousand? I honestly didn't know I'd done that... hmmmmm... Gotta stop drinkin' and typin'   (what's really sad is I don't drink so I just plumb missed it)
Balladeer
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7 posted 01-09-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Here's a grand salute for number five grand from a grand lady!! Thank you, Denise, for being here.  
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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Pennsylvania


8 posted 01-09-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise, Denise! What can a poet say
You've been a friend to all in every way
You are the guardian angel of the forum
Looking down on each and every poem
5000 posts is proof of what I say
An angel truly is what you portray
Irish eyes of blue are filled with love
And write the wondrous sonnet shown above
Congratulations, Denise!
Love you,
Liz
Corinne
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 5247
state of confusion


9 posted 01-09-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Simply beautiful, Denise!

And Congrads on your 5000th post!

Corinne
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


10 posted 01-09-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
Beautiful poem Denise  
Mike
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11 posted 01-09-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Applause!!!  
Dark Angel
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12 posted 01-09-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A Beautiful poem Denise!  CONGRATULATIONS!!! on your 5000th.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Alwye
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In the space between moments


13 posted 01-09-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful!  Congrats on your 5000th, denise!  We're all very blessed to have you here!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Denise
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14 posted 01-09-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you all so much for your warm, kind comments! It is a pleasure knowing each and every one of you. I feel as though we have been friends forever. I can't believe I only found Passions less than 5 months ago. You are all very special to me. My life would be the poorer without you.

Write on Poets! Read on Readers! Long Live Passions!

p.s. Thank you for the lovely poem, Elizabeth!

 Denise

doreen peri
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15 posted 01-09-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Denise... this is wonderful! You are truly a poet in word and heart! I want to tell you that I read your posts quite often but haven't responded as much as I should have in the past.. you are a very talented individual and I've enjoyed meeting you this past year... please continue your very fine writing!
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


16 posted 01-09-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Denise I"m so  .  I didn't notice you were that far in your posts!  Forgive me!  
CONGRATS!  go look in the announcements!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
Posts 989
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17 posted 01-09-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Congratulations come for thee
A great poem for #5000 shared has she
I find the compliment in order and write lots more....pretty please
Well done and thanks to you Denise

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


First__Knight
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18 posted 01-09-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Honored to be within your day Denise.  Congrats

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
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19 posted 01-10-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Congratulations Denise on 5000  
You share with us your most remarkable talent and you give your friendship to all.....Thank you, Denise..  
Jim Hastings
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since 12-22-1999
Posts 24
Arizona


20 posted 01-10-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings

Congratulations on number 5K.
I've enjoyed your posts.

 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?

Roger Leewright
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since 09-25-1999
Posts 29
Beaverton, OR.USA


21 posted 01-10-2000 02:53 AM       View Profile for Roger Leewright   Email Roger Leewright   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roger Leewright

Denise, I want to congradulate U on #5000!!!1
I have enjoyed your work often and seem to always find some comforting and helpful words posted to mine from U. Thank you for the laughter and the tears!!    
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


22 posted 01-10-2000 06:04 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Ok- now you've done gone and made me feel guilty...I've been here for over four months and haven't go that far!G*  Guess I'll have to catch up some...My Congatulations marvelous woman that you are!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Denise
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23 posted 01-10-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks so much for your kind words! The pleasure has surely been mine!  

 Denise

Parker
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Posts 3135
... the old black rum


24 posted 01-10-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Denise, I'm so new here but I agree with everybody here, your poems are wonderful and your posts are so kind. congrats on the 5KPosts.

James (Parker)
 
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