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The m&m Heart

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Poet deVine
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My heart is like an M&M
A hard shell cover outside
The sweetness in the middle
Is all the shell will hide

I will not melt in your mouth
Nor in your hand I fear
This candy will not be devoured
Not by just anyone here

Looks may be deceiving
And you may want to enter
But remember, there just may be
A peanut at the center

Crispy may not be in my soul
Nor nuts be upon my heart
But once you feel the love I have
You canít stop once you start!

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HM3
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1 posted 01-09-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HM3

My kind of poem. I love it!

 Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...


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2 posted 01-09-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

What a sweet poem...
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3 posted 01-09-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PoetdeVine -
Absolutely adorable !
I can just see that little M&M dancing around.
Adorable !
~*Marge*~
Nan
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MM-MM.... GOOD!!!



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5 posted 01-09-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ROFL...instead of typing RainbowGirl I typed RainbowHeart....oh my!!!...No wonder it wouldn't let me in..*g*

No nuts upon you heart...hmmmmmmmmm, OK, if you say so...oooops...*g*

You are something else!...M@M Special is my rating!

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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So sweet PdV...I love it!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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7 posted 01-09-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PoetdeVine,
Cute, funny and well done. You are one of my favorites. *L* Sy
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8 posted 01-09-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! So cute, so sweet!...mmmmmmmm good!


 Denise

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9 posted 01-09-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

But the question remains... is your heart green or red? Perhaps the new color blue? I doubt it would be anything so drab as brown. Well, what ever the color, it has been a most enjoyable treat my sweet Lady DeVine.
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10 posted 01-09-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, PDV, I'm sorry...couldn't answer any quicker
You know your poetry always makes me giggle so and SNICKER
Since I'm an M&M in fact, it seems I have the grounds
To offer you my sweetness if you offer me your MOUNDS!  
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 01-09-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Cute - cute - cute
And there's Nan again, showing off with her graphics. How does she do it?
This poem is precious
Liz
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I really like this  
Martie
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I loved this, so cute!
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Excellent my dear friend! And whomever enters that wonderful heart of yours will never regret it!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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Thank you all for your kind replies! (Balladeer if you touch my Mounds I'll Tootsie Pop you so hard you'll need a Candy Cane!LOL).

Elizabeth, the graphic that Nan used was designed by ME!!!! And you can't imagine how hard it was to press those M&M's onto the page!

Rebecca...I don't think we have to worry about that! No one's getting past that hard candy shell remember!  
CrazyChick
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16 posted 01-10-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Great poem!!!   I loved it  ;-)
First__Knight
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I just love M&Ms.....Yummy  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


Jim Hastings
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18 posted 01-10-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings

Wonderfull poem, I understand most everybody likes M&M's      

 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?

devina
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19 posted 01-10-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

LOL@Balladeer and Devine, you two are TOO much...Cute poem...now you've got me thinking about food though...G*

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