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Dream adventure

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patchoulipumpkin
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0 posted 01-09-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for patchoulipumpkin   Email patchoulipumpkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for patchoulipumpkin

Had a dream I was an adventurer
Like Indiana Jones meets Lara Croft
But I was more male
And I jumped from one circumstance
To another

Evading
Leaping
Running
Catching the bad guys

Then I was in a room with a cobra
And it bit me
I felt the pain in my leg rise
I guess it was the poison finding its way

It was scary, I was wondering if I was going to die
But there was an antidote
I took it, my leg felt better
And wondered if the adventure was over
As I sat up in my bed

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Nate Dogg
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1 posted 01-09-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

That was a lovely poem and you have a very creative imagination too!

 Nathan
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 01-09-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Patch,
You better watch what you eat before you go to bed. Enjoyed the poem.
Denise
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3 posted 01-09-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Whew! What a nightmare! But more male than Indiana Jones?...that's not possible!  
Wonderful poem!

 Denise

Severn
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4 posted 01-10-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You do have a unique style that I enjoy - well done!

 
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