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Parker
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... the old black rum


26 posted 01-21-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

RainbowGirl, I love this piece.... especially the line "I refuse to stand and watch" it has great meaning for those who wish to listen. I'm listening. Beautifully done.

Parker
Echo Rhayne
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27 posted 01-21-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


28 posted 01-21-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Queen,

If it pleases your Ladyship, may I add that you do not merely step, you process forward with the regal strides of a true princess.  naturally, when Toe bends down to lay his cape across the puddles (of tears??), you will impart all due leverage to his broad behind for all of us, will you not, M'Lady??

As for you wanting to quit - there is not a chance of that because you are a Grand Dame in the finest of traditions.
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One step at a time is the surest way

Excellent poem
 
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