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The Thin Line Between Friendship and Love Relationship

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TKHo
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0 posted 01-09-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for TKHo   Email TKHo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TKHo

This poem is called Friends. This is how I feel about a soon becoming close friend. Enjoy!!!!

Friends

The kind of friends we've become is special and strong,
I've been hoping for this for so long,
Wheather you just want to be friends or more,
Doesn't change the way of how I feel,
Sometimes, somethings are worth risking for,
but what I have with you is worth too much to risk for,
The note was given to stop the wonder,
Sometimes we are disparate for the meaning of relation,
We then fail to relize the simple solution,
The kind of love I feel for you is as same as you feel for me,
Being good friends is not what I want.........
It is what we both want!!!

Please tell me what you think!!!


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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-09-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I think that the distance between being friends and lovers is only a breath, and if it happens, it should not ruin a friendship, if you are truly friends. Friends are forever.
This poem shows you have given it thought
Liz
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2 posted 01-10-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome to Passions - and I simply agree with everything Liz has said - she is a wise one!

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 01-10-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I feel the same way as the above. Good poem and welcome to Passions!

 Nathan
Denise
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4 posted 01-10-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, TK! Great thoughts on friendship! Check your email!

 Denise

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5 posted 01-10-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Welcome TKHO, This is a wonderful poem on friendship, I think if you arent the best of friends before you start anything else the relationship wont work anyhow , cause alot of the time its the friendship combined with the love that makes it work those are just my thoughts anyway  
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6 posted 01-11-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

When you believe, you keep believing, no choice, it just is...

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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