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Moon-Kissed Night

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devina
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0 posted 01-09-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


On this night,
I kiss you
as the moon.

You light up,
brighter than
the fragile sky.

I caress you,
with the tune
of love.

I bathe you,
with the sight
of my eyes.

We join,
like an explosion
of the mind.

I giggle aloud,
with the backdrop
of stars.

We are one,
beneath
the moon-kissed sky.


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-09-2000).]
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 01-09-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oohhh...this is innocently beautiful devina!  I love the moon, so it means an extra bit more to me!     I can feel your excitement as you giggle in this!  Aaahhh....to kiss under the moon....you did well with this concept!  Bravissimo!  PS...You are SO funny in Adult!  LOL  You keep ME laughing!  HAHA

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
Jer
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2 posted 01-09-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for Jer   Email Jer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jer

Great poem.  I too love the way you added the moon into your poem.  I like to see things carfuly interwoven into peoples works. I get the idea that the kiss must have been great! Good work.
devina
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3 posted 01-09-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thank you Femme dear, glad to know I'm making you pee your pants in adult- you had me go'en tonight!!!!! Yes, this is an innocent one isn't it? hmmmm... Sometimes I surprise myself!!   
Jer- the kiss WAS great, just a long while ago   Of course the moon is out every night so...hmmmm. I'll have to work on it...Seriously though, thank you for your comment!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
whiskey
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4 posted 01-09-2000 03:08 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sweet   Well written I too like the moon its a beautiful thing
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-09-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm with PFF...I like the sweet innocence of this one  
Tara Simms
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6 posted 01-09-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This is refreshing.  I love "we join, like an explosion of the mind".  Awesome imagery.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Quiet Lightning
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7 posted 01-09-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

this was a cool poem.Good luck to you and your loved one
Denise
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8 posted 01-09-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Kisses can be like that sometimes!  Enjoy them when they are!

 Denise

far and away
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9 posted 01-09-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for far and away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for far and away

Wonderful poem and very good imagery!!!  I enjoy this one!!
First__Knight
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10 posted 01-09-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Has the feel of a child with the love of truth.....Like inoccent love.  Very nice

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


Parker
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11 posted 01-10-2000 12:23 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

devina, I wish my usage of the moon could be so passionett... aaah if I could be that moon.

James (Parker)
Mike
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12 posted 01-10-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed the poem...  just goes to show you don't have to be verbose to say something wonderfully.
Michael
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13 posted 01-10-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I love this soft, sweet verse, devina.  
"I bathe you,
with the sight
of my eyes."

...great line.

Michael
devina
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14 posted 01-10-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I want to thank you all for the kind words!!!See Femme- innocence has it's advantages!!!LOL This one was just my stab at simplicity...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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