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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-01-08 11:40 PM



Lady of the Light

She was always the Sentinel
She knew this from the start
Guardian to her one great love
Mystery of a woman’s heart

Long days and bittersweet nights
Wind whips at stone cold walls
Isolation her companion
No comfort in these dark halls

She doesn’t really mind the cold
Or the ninety stairs to the light
To tend to whale oil reserves
Standing guard on foggy nights

Her love is away on a ship at sea
She waits for its arrival
Listens to the fog horn’s moan
Worries for their survival

The wind howls, seas are high
She looks again and again
No sign of the ship by sunrise
She hurries to land’s end

Into town, now gathering
They all ask, “have you heard?”
Hope and faith uniting them
But hours pass without word

The Brother James, lost at sea
Husbands, fathers, and sons
And when it’s over they tally
The number at sixty-one

She feels at fault in some way
The one trusted with the light
Now the years pass by, but still
She dreams of him at night

One day the light did not burn
No one was tending it you see
The lady of the light was gone
To rejoin her man of the sea

© July 1999 Corinne Bailey



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Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 2000-01-08 11:56 PM


Alright corrine,
Very nice and you said it true,
so here's Ye AYE! ! back to you.
  The fog is rising,rolling in,
a bell buoy in the distants,
seagulls screaming in the mist of
       crashing waves.
          EARTHMAN
other sailing poems posted
I'd rather sail at night
I like to write poems

       (Paul Hoekman)


[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-09-2000).]

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-01-09 08:49 AM


How sad   I do love light houses and stories of the sea though
whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-09 08:56 AM


This is so sad well written and a great poem
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-01-09 09:37 AM


Wonderful, Corrine.
~Marge~

Corinne
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5 posted 2000-01-09 10:55 AM


thank you, Paul, Hoot_Owl and Marge!

Corinne

Denise
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6 posted 2000-01-09 07:53 PM


A haunting beauty, mystery
Is found within the sea
A deep allure it holds for me
And thus it shall forever be.

Poems of the sea are my most favorite ones! And yours are always exquisite!  

 Denise


Nan
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7 posted 2000-01-09 08:12 PM


AHOY!!



Corinne
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8 posted 2000-01-09 08:19 PM


Denise, you always say the nicest things! Thanks!

Nan -
totally cool, matey!  Where did you find that?

Corinne

Severn
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9 posted 2000-01-10 07:42 PM


This is so haunting and sadly mysterious...very well written, Corinne.


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