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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho


0 posted 01-08-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

In memory’s lash I saw you flash
through yesterday’s deep musings.
The winds we changed have rearranged
our years; and youth’s enthusings.
~ ~ ~
A sorrow cast in the depths of the past,
in a canyon’s echoed hollow.
Our holy ground without a sound,
taught both of us to follow.
~ ~ ~
Though dear the fire of sweet desire,
and ne’er our love could sever;
yet a shadow lies beyond youth’s skies;
some weeping lasts forever.




 ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG
© Copyright 2000 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Femme's Father
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1 posted 01-08-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Femme's Father   Email Femme's Father   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Femme's Father

Rosemary and Keeper: Some people cannot understand the true depth of meaning of your poems unless they have been there or have compassion for their fellow man.  I like both of your poetry..it is full of tender sorrow from the experiences of life..again I say that I for one love your stuff. And I am sure that God will give you two grace to go through the pain so that you may share it with others and comfort them in their sorrows. I say some of our brightest revelations come from some of our darkest experiences..   james david  read my poem called the Agony of Death, probably on page 3
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2 posted 01-08-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent poem, Rosemary, with a great rhyme scheme and meter.
whiskey
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4 posted 01-08-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is another sad poem Rosemary my heart is with you always  
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-08-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rosemary,
I agree with Balladeer, nice job and a good poem.
devina
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6 posted 01-09-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Now that I can make the connection with you and your husband, I'm able to appreciate the poetry more, as it is beautiful in heart and soul!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Nan
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8 posted 01-09-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Rosemary, you and poetry are synonymous.....
Quiet Lightning
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9 posted 01-09-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

I liked the poem even though it was kind of sad.
caroline
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10 posted 01-09-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Rosemary, the depth of emotion in your poetry always touches me. You write so very beautifully.

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Parker
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11 posted 01-10-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Rosemary, your poetry so touches the heart and just worded so beautifully.

Parker
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