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Seasonal Beauty

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0 posted 01-08-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Poets have said beauty lasts but a season
I disagree
for in this rhyme lies my reason
In every time and every way
does beauty hold sway
from deepest crackling cold
of mid-winter night
to summer's display
of Nature's vibrant glory
and uncanny delight

is a time of renewal and procreation
ice melts and ground thaws
in burgeoning expectation
up the trunks of majestic trees
life will creep
as Nature's children awaken
from long winter sleep
Budding branches split with the hesitant green
of new born leaves
returning birds sing a song serene
accepting vernal promise
and winter's reprieves

Colors explode
with rapturous abandon in High summer's heat
from wildflowers in full bloom
tinting the air with sweet
scents of Mother Earth's own perfume
Burdensome fruit
drag down blackberry canes
spicy earth scents the air after warm summer rains
butterflies and dragonflies
add a touch of faerie
dancing across the skies
while cicadas hum
and chipmunks make merry

Summer color pales
before Autumnal finery that prevails
in cloaking the world in vibrant hues
Banshee winds howl the news
to Nature's waiting ears
that fatten for their long sleep
between passing years
in dens dug safe and deep
Birds migrate south
obeying fate and instinctive call
rushing ahead of first snowfall

In winter bare limbs reach into the sky
like skeletal fingers
desperately grasping at reasons why
Crystal clear nights
provide awesome sights
from Northern Lights
to stars arrayed
like diamonds displayed
glittering with wonder
so profound
that hardened hearts
are torn asunder
with winters snowy
and cold arts
Solitude speaks volumes
in dead winter's echoless tombs
muffled by snow
and icy airflow

These then are my reasons
for claiming beauty in all seasons
and swear it falls not to decay
I see such
as both pride and duty
to relay the beauty
we hide with garish technological display

©2000 DreamEvil

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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1 posted 01-08-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I agree Dream ,There is beauty in every season , this poem is wonderful I liked it alot thanks for the read  
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2 posted 01-08-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I too agree that there is beauty in every season.  Great work, I especially loved the verse on fall.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

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3 posted 01-08-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Beautiful writing Dream...and beauty lies in the beholder and you behold well  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"

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5 posted 01-08-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-Brother, this is beautiful, you've captured the beauty in all seasons brilliantly. Well Done!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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6 posted 01-08-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Like a jewel, like a flower, like the icy stars, I could live inside your descriptions!

You write beautifully.

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7 posted 01-09-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dark one - and here I see you again in the half-light. This is exquisite - and did indeed capture for me the beauty of your seasons - especially winter for I know not of the snow.

Thankyou for this my friend - I am so much clearer on your weather!  

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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8 posted 01-09-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for Lisa Graham-Marshall   Email Lisa Graham-Marshall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisa Graham-Marshall

"What a lovely read..Thanx"
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9 posted 01-09-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"Up the majestic trees life will creep"
You know, I think you see through my eyes and breath through my lungs
You have said evreything I think in this poem, and you say it so well
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10 posted 01-09-2000 09:23 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Scott, this makes for a nice captured the seasons well in it  
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11 posted 01-09-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Now this is very, very lovely     I love the flow, and the imagery is really wonderful...well done as always, friend!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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12 posted 01-09-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Splendid display of nature in words
Very nice to read and leading through.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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13 posted 01-09-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful writing Dreamevil.

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14 posted 01-09-2000 02:52 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pretty darned awesome reasoning in this one.
You've summed it up.
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15 posted 01-09-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A beautiful piece of writing!


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16 posted 01-09-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

You did well with the seasons.  I always claim each new season as my favorite, they are all beautiful in their own right, it's hard to choose!
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17 posted 01-09-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I loved this, the description-beautiful, so full and lovely with the right words.  
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