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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-08 10:34 PM



" A Wonderful Day"

Today I sing
My heart within
Shinning bright
Giving forth a light
The sky is blue
No gray in sight
I have you near
Inside myself
The birds so happy
Up there in flight
My eyes are wide
Seeing beauty
The grass is green
Soft on my skin
My mind is clear
Bad thoughts not there
The sun is warm
Softly touching me
My body new
No pains I feel
What a day
Thank you

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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1 posted 2000-01-08 10:52 PM


Whiskey, great poem.  That's the kind of day to have every day.
First__Knight
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2 posted 2000-01-08 10:54 PM


Wonderful day and wonderful poem...   

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"



whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-09 03:29 AM


Thanks Eloise and First knight  
Lisa Graham-Marshall
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4 posted 2000-01-09 06:40 AM


"Thanx for this..you have just made my day"
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-01-09 06:57 AM


Whiskey
Your beautiful spirit shines though in this lovely poem, which is the first thing I read this morning to brighten my day.
Liz

whiskey
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6 posted 2000-01-09 08:15 AM


Lisa , I am glad I could make your day  

Liz, Thanks you for your nice comment  

whiskey
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7 posted 2000-01-09 08:17 AM


Thanks everyone you are all great  

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-09-2000).]

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