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A wonderful day

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whiskey
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" A Wonderful Day"

Today I sing
My heart within
Shinning bright
Giving forth a light
The sky is blue
No gray in sight
I have you near
Inside myself
The birds so happy
Up there in flight
My eyes are wide
Seeing beauty
The grass is green
Soft on my skin
My mind is clear
Bad thoughts not there
The sun is warm
Softly touching me
My body new
No pains I feel
What a day
Thank you
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-08-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Whiskey, great poem.  That's the kind of day to have every day.
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2 posted 01-08-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Wonderful day and wonderful poem...   

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


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Thanks Eloise and First knight  
Lisa Graham-Marshall
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4 posted 01-09-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for Lisa Graham-Marshall   Email Lisa Graham-Marshall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisa Graham-Marshall

"Thanx for this..you have just made my day"
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Whiskey
Your beautiful spirit shines though in this lovely poem, which is the first thing I read this morning to brighten my day.
Liz
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Lisa , I am glad I could make your day  

Liz, Thanks you for your nice comment  
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Thanks everyone you are all great  

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