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You Still Have Time
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You Still Have Time |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
If you stepped back to look at your past, Tell me, what would you see? Was it fulfilling, or did you live it too fast? Won't you be honest with me? Do you see a contented person That has met his goal? Or do you feel overrun, And life has taken its toll? Can you say you are pleased With all the decisions you've made? Or would you like to back track, So you could make a trade? When you see your reflection in the mirror, Do you hold your head up high? Are you proud of who you are? Can you look yourself in the eye? If you find you aren't all you thought you could be. The flags go up and you see the wrong signs. Then start today to make some changes, While you still have time on your side. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great Elosie, well done  |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
This is an excellent poem. Great job!!!!!!!! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you whiskey and CC. Appreciate the comments. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I loved this poem.... Its a great one to think about... Sending it back up to the top so more people will hopefully read it.. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great message, Eloise! We should all take stock of our lives while there is still time to make the changes we would like to see! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good one Eloise, I like your topic and your poem. |
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