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Heartbreak

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Vaneet Randhawa
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Heartbreak

I look at you standing there,
So clueless, not knowing that I care.
Whenever I see you, I feel the burst,
Just wishing that to you I am first.
Don't you know?  Don't you realize?
It is you, and only you, that I prize?
Your eyes deep brown, and so intense
Deepens me, but there's a fence
That blocks my way to get to you.
A fence so strong it makes me blue.
I can never love a person so great
As you, my love, my heartbreak.

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Femme's Father
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1 posted 01-08-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Femme's Father   Email Femme's Father   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Femme's Father

Excellent thoughts-- I too have that T-shirt.
Many times in my younger days, my heart would yearn for a girl that I thought was soo
beautiful- and they did not even know I felt this way. It was so heartbreaking and I could not understand why they could not feel what I felt --wow, it was so strong! But it went away finally,somewhat..best of luck to you in your search..  james david
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This is wonderful , Those feelings that are unreconised one day will be ,keep searching  
 
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