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Vaneet Randhawa
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since 01-08-2000
Posts 5
California


0 posted 01-08-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Vaneet Randhawa   Email Vaneet Randhawa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vaneet Randhawa's Home Page   View IP for Vaneet Randhawa

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I see your eyes gaze upon me
And I wonder of what it is that you see.
Am I lovely?  Or am I ugly?
As for me, if you must know,
I must confess, I love you so.
I look at you and what I see
Is a person that's treasured by me.
Your face so gentle, and eyes so pure;
The only problem is that love has no cure.
You're loved by all
So I can't love you
Because then I would know
That our love isn't true.

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
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1 posted 01-09-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is short, but has alot of emotion in it - I too, have heard myself asking these same questions! This poem reminded me of someone I was truly obsessed with, but he thought of me as just a friend - - it was so frustrating to be so overwhelmed by his very presence, and wondering just what went through his head when he thought of me....LOL  He probably saw me as an obsessive stalker!  **sigh   Well, he's married now to a very beautiful young woman, and to this day, I still envy her!  I think it's very common to wonder how someone REALLY see's you....

Glad you shared this!  Welcome to Passion's - I hope to see more of your work!  I think you'll like it here!     Gives you a great opportunity to share your soul and thoughts.  Enjoy!


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CrazyChick
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since 01-05-2000
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2 posted 01-09-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

I think a lot of people ask themselves these questions....i have numerous times
well written,  Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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