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Wishes

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Vaneet Randhawa
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Wishes

Do you ever wish
you could be a star
shining in the sky?
A star so beautiful
and so very high?
Do you ever wish
you could be a river
with water so clear?
A river so very straight
and having no fears?
Do stop wishing, you’ve gone too far
For you are your own self
And you are what you are
Wishes are wishes,
Thoughts are thoughts,
But what is reality
Should never be fought.

© Copyright 2000 Vaneet - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-08-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Vaneet-

Very nicely done .... welcome to Passion's
Look forward to reading more.

Please be sure and read some of the other poets and comment on their works also.


~Marge~
whiskey
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Vaneet,
This is wonderful, I hope to read more of your poems  Welcome to Passions  
Vaneet Randhawa
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Thanx Whiskey!  I look forward to reading more of your great poemz and also writing more of my own.
Poet deVine
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Welcome to passions family! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your e-mail!
Paul Hoekman
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WELCOME
very enjoyable first post,
look forward to many many more.
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Welcome to passions, Vaneet...

    
HelmutB
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Very nicely done
and Welcome


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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Welcome to passions  
Lisa Graham-Marshall
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"Lovely poem..and welcome"
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