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Imagination's Destination

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Lost Dreamer
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Imagination's Destination

Floating above
the atmosphere of time
freely envisioning
kaleidoscopes
of natures abundance.

Soaring beyond reality
to footpaths of imagination
dancing with stars
twinkling upon riverbeds
creating sparkling waterfalls.

Frolicking down
the grassy meadow side
exhibiting freedom
of a delighted child
on a sun filled afternoon.

Creating pleasant images
as a means to delight
paying highest honor
to the continuous source
of imagination's destination.
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Michael
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1 posted 01-08-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautifully poem, Gloria.  I really love the third stanza...what a feeling that is.  And of course, there is but one, the creator, who deserves highest honor...very well done.

Michael
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Very nice poem Gloria...it's amazing the places ones imagination can take them. I often thing of POWs and the people in concentraion camps who survived only by imagining themselves someplace different. Nice job!!
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I am nothing without my imagination! I think it's a shame when children are discouraged from using theirs..and a bigger shame when adults have none....good poem!  
Denise
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Oh, and the places we can go...there's no limit! And no price! Everybody can go! Just one of God's many wonderful gifts! And thank you, Gloria, for this wonderful gift!  I enjoyed the trip!

 Denise

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Yo LD: Enjoyed the read... I think it's one of my best features... my imagination. Keeps me young don't cha know. My best to you and yours.
Corinne
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picture of poetic perfection,
lost dreamer, you aren't lost at all!


Corinne
Elizabeth Santos
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I loved the last verse. What a delightful poem. I enjoyed it
Liz
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This piece is striking in its natural elemental references...a fine poetic escape to the carefree meadows of youth. Thank you!

Dear LadyClaire
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Excellent, dreamer. The imagination is everything. Reality is for people who can't face fantasy. Good work  
Kid Pedestal
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It's already been said, but the description that you give to the imagination is remarkable.

Kid Pedestal
Dark Angel
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LD, This is excellent!! Can't do without my imagination.  

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Samuel Coleridge


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I thank all of you for reading, and I'm glad you all enjoyed. I appreciate all your kind replies.
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