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Cuddlez
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0 posted 01-08-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Turn away/ What I need to know
What I need to know is quite simple.
A kiss on the cheeck will answer it
Turn away if you are playing
Hold my hand if you tell the truth.
I'm not the one who like's to be
The good friend who's more in private

What I want to know is the truth
Do you want to be with me?
Or are you with someone else?
I don't like the uncertainty
Not knowing if you are with
THAT girl on no one
If you're playing me, turn away

What I want to know is what you see?
I see a blond hair girl
Who looks somewhat like me
Blue eyes, not fat but not too skinny
Who wears tight pants and a black jacket
But if you want to have her...
Then please, tell me the truth
Turn away from me


 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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whiskey
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1 posted 01-08-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I hope this person tells you what you need to know I know how uncertainty can feel its not a nice feeling , great poem  
Cuddlez
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2 posted 01-08-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks whisky,
Havent met you before so HI ). Would you show him the poem if you were me?

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
whiskey
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3 posted 01-08-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Cuddlez , Hi nice to meet you  
I would show him but thats my opinion you have to do what feels right for you
Deborah
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4 posted 01-08-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

You should show him this poem, it might make him understand how you feel.  Sometimes guys can be blind and not realize that you feel the way you do.  This might open his eyes.  I like the poem, it makes a lot of sense.
        Deborah
Cuddlez
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5 posted 01-09-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Well, I didnt even bother to give this poem to him. Its not worth it. I had my eyes opened tonight with some stuff, and while I cry at knowing he's not my baby, I know its for the better. Who needs a player, someone who likes to lead you on and then finds another? I still might talk to him, Im deciding. I think he was kissing both of us at the same time so I'm not too thrilled but.... Good night and sleep tight everyone.

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
 
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