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cokey_95
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0 posted 01-08-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for cokey_95   Email cokey_95   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cokey_95



Silent tears enough for a river,
rolling along through the hills.
Hills are the troubles I
have been through, A rocky
path to travel.. filled with the
twists and turns of heartache.
A heartache caused by you..
alone and afraid once again
to ride that well traveled road
heading back to you..you the one
who claims to love me like no other
you the one who leaves me broken
and ashamed to walk thru those doors
that i walk into to leave me bruised..
One day i pray you will stop all of the
anger or let that anger go and make the
pain you cause go away in time i know
the rough playing will go to far and instead
of lying on our brand new bed we bought
i will be lying in the ground in a box you
bought.
© Copyright 2000 Karin - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-08-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is so sad , A wonderful poem
I hope you feel like you can write happier poems one day
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 01-09-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh wow!  You sure said alot in this short piece!  I'm not so sure it's a good idea to stay with someone who treats you this way....Love is not worth living in fear of your life, or your safety.  You only live once. Please be careful around this person if he truly hurts you like this.  If you need someone to talk to, feel free to email me, I have big ears.     I also want to Welcome you to Passion's!  Hope to see more of your writing!  I think you'll find this is a great place to express yourself.  Enjoy!  Gennifer

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
CrazyChick
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since 01-05-2000
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3 posted 01-09-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

You did a terrific job writting this poem, but you have me a little worried. I know whats its like to be in a relationship like this, it can be very hard to leave.  If you ever need someone to talk to, please write to me..i'll always listen.
Be careful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Songbird
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4 posted 01-09-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

You write very well. This too make me concerned about you. Hope you are getting some support. You have a friend in me too.
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