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Quiet Lightning
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0 posted 01-07-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

feel free to comment

     Sad
It's the tears in my eyes
and the pain in my heart
if it was my life my mom wanted
she should take it away
Just bring me to my death
in one breath I'd be gone
Let me know what went wrong
I've been hurt before
even had a broken heart
the way my mom treats me
I'd rather be broke and starve
I'm sorry I'm being a teenager
and I know I told a lie
Don't punish me forever
cuz if so I'd rather die
I know you have rules set
if I brake them you get upset
now you punish me at times
but soon you're gonna regret
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I would really love to read your poem but the colour of the text is impossible for me to read , would be nice if you could edit it to a different colour  
 
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