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Grandma Jo
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0 posted 2000-01-07 10:03 PM


This reminds me of what I see here at Passions!

We are friends, and because of this I care.
I feel your hurts, your worries and your joys,
I see your tears, your smiles and outstretched hand,
I hear your cries, your giggles and your tone of voice.

We are friends, and because of this I care.
I want to help whenever you are blue,
I want to be there for you whenever you feel down,
I also want to share your triumphs with you.

We are friends, and because of this I care.
I feel so sure that God above has made us so ,
I feel His love surround our friendship,
I feel that He,who loves us all, will help our friendship grow.

[This message has been edited by Grandma Jo (edited 01-07-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-07 10:17 PM


Reminds me of this wonderful place, too!  Nice poem, Jo!

 Denise


Marilyn
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2 posted 2000-01-07 10:20 PM


Very aptly put Jo. It does encompass the feeling here at Passions. Thankyou for sharing.

(BTW is your icq not up? I have been trying to get in touch with you this evening)

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-07 10:42 PM


This is lovely sure does describe this place its a special friendship  
Eloise
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4 posted 2000-01-07 10:51 PM


I agree with all the above.  Nice poem Jo.  Welcome to Passions.
Paul Hoekman
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5 posted 2000-01-07 11:53 PM


Way to go
Grandma Jo,
"what a friend we have in Jesus"
and the Spirit which lives
in and throughout this forum.
   wonderful poem,
     Thanks,
           Paul


[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-08-2000).]

Martie
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6 posted 2000-01-07 11:59 PM


Lovely poem and sweet meaning.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-01-08 09:03 AM


Yes, very true of passions  
HelmutB
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8 posted 2000-01-08 11:36 AM


A very nice tribute to Friends, I like that
and so true
Helmut

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Grandma Jo
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9 posted 2000-01-13 08:42 PM


Many times Marilyn has told me that this was a nice place... she was right!  Thanks all of you so much for your kind comments.
Rus Bowden
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10 posted 2000-01-13 08:46 PM


Hi Jo,

This must be a wonderful place!  I realized on second read that your first stanza was felt and heard in the heart.

Rus

John Yaws
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11 posted 2000-01-13 08:49 PM


A lovely sentiment, and well written, ma'am.

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12 posted 2000-01-13 09:00 PM


GrandmaJo -

It is a friendly place.
Loving, caring friends .....
welcome.  
I like our expressions of friendship.
We all bask in the glow.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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