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Eden way

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Seymour Tabin
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               Eden way

An armature of words desire,
She sculptures in poetic fire.
A rainbow made of minds insist,
Creating phantoms in the mist.

She flutters on wings of phrase and charm,
That brings my heart to wild alarm.
She builts a world of rhythmic rhyme,
With the foibles of grace and time.

She flies in the mist of amour,
On butterfly wings of allure.
And the residue leaves veins of goal,
That has captured my very soul.

And I am caught, her cloak of fashion,
In an unbelievable pull of passion.
It is here the vortex blinds my eyes,
It is here where the nightingale sighs.

It is here, my path to Eden way.
It is here I would lie and stay.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-07-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Sy, This is beautiful you are so talented , your work amazes me  
Denise
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2 posted 01-07-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful! Lovely, lovely words! *sigh*

 Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-07-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*sighs* absolutely lovely Seymore  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-07-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
This is so lovely
Your talents are unmatched
Love ya,
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-08-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Whisky,
Not quite as beautiful as you from your picture.
Seymour Tabin
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Denise,
Thank you sweet Denise. *L* Sy
Hoot,
Your sigh send me a high. *L* Sy
Elizabeth,
There is a small change from the original.
A rainbow made of minds insist,
Creating phantoms in the mist.
Thank you Love Sy.
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy
I do love this poem so
But now I'm going on to read the new one
This is so lovely
Liz
Nan
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8 posted 01-08-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Applause, dear Sy.... much applause...
Pepper
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'Sigh' Sy....  
Gorgeous....seems I use that word alot with your pieces...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 01-08-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Applause from you are my dearest wish. *L* Sy
Pepper,
Your words are as beautiful as your picture.
*L* Sy
Betty Gravitt
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11 posted 01-08-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

I'll just use the same word again for it describes your poems the best way I know how.... Wonderful... Thanks Sy my friend.

 B Gravitt

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12 posted 01-08-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Quite nicely done, Seymour.
This speaks with a soft eloquence
that flutters like the very winged
butterfly of which you speak.
~Marge~
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Beautiful indeed Seymour. Thanks for the read..
HelmutB
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14 posted 01-08-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

To find someone to share this way
Your lucky man, what else could I say
I like the end, bravo to this conclusion
What wonderfull words in fusion
Grace covers ever line
to read it smooth is such divine
Helmut
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 01-08-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Betty,
thanks for the wonderful.
Marge,
Thank you Marge *L*
Moon,
You welcome and thank you.
Helmut,
Nice answer, nice poem, thank you.
 
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