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Hold me

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vandana
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0 posted 01-07-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Hold me tight,
Don't want this night to end,
I want this night to remember,
Hold me ,kiss me ,touch me,
Hold me close to you,
Love is so sweet,
Don't want this night to end,
Let's remember to the years
we spent together,
Let's take a deep breathe
for the next step we take,
So hold me,
Tell me If you really care for me ,
Tell me ,tell me the things we used to say,
The night is young and
we can make every wish upon very star
Hold me tight,
Don't let me go,
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Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-08-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

I enjoyed the poem very much.
You may consider reformatting,
break it up, it might be easier on the eye.
My first post "snowflake" was not formatted,
and I did not consider it much until our good friend Hoot fixed it up for me now
I enjoy it more.
          Keep On Writing,
              Paul
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 01-09-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

It is nice to be in the arm's of the one we love.  I could feel your yearning in this piece.  I hope you hear all the things your heart needs to hear soon!  Thanks for sharing !  

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
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