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The world took you away

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vandana
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0 posted 01-07-2000 12:09 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Sorry,If I hurt you,
If you do,
forgive me,
I'll make it  up to you,
Before I could come to you,
The world took you away,
Knowing It's too late to say sorry to you,
Do you remember you loved me
Before the world took you away from me,
If you do remember ,
Then the things I was saying ,
But didin't meant to hurt you,
I used to believe that love was strong,
We're never wrong for this love,
But before I could make it up to you,
The world took you away from me,
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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1 posted 01-07-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

So very sad.  There are many things I'm sure we all wish we could have said to someone, things we thought to say...but, thought them too late.

Hugs
Excellent poem

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 01-07-2000).]
Mike
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2 posted 01-07-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Another nice poem Vandana.  Enjoyed.
Sonny
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3 posted 01-07-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

Vandana -

By your side I used to lay
Words of passion I used to say
Softly whispering tender desires
In hopes you would ignite the fires
Lighting the way to a golden path
But, darkness dominates the aftermath
Gone are my dreams and my only honor
Replaced by sadness and a dying flower
My inspiration resides in heaven above
Because I did not speak loud enough.
Denise
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4 posted 01-07-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet lovely, vandana!

 Denise

 
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