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Time For Sleep

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whiskey
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0 posted 01-07-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Time For Sleep "

I sit here eyes wide
Tiredness creeps upon
My awake state
Bed is calling
My pillow Soft
Dreams waiting
For me to dream
My eyes are heavy
Closing on me
I cannot keep aware
They're in a stare
My mind is full
Of wonder from all
As I drift into a sleep
So deep into a daze
I see no longer
As here I lay my head
To awake to a better day
With happier feel



[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-07-2000).]
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1 posted 01-07-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A good night's sleep always makes me feel better too! A beautiful poem, Whiskey! As usual!  

 Denise

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Thankyou for replying Denise your a lovely Person  
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Your incredible!
I invision you walk
around all day
with poems just
flowing out your mouth
constantly.
So keep on talking.
           Paul
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4 posted 01-07-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Paul , I dont know about incredible but thanks , and youd be right just latley I have been walking around with poems mixing in my mind  

Julie
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5 posted 01-07-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Enjoyed the read Wishey, This one was a little differant.
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