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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-07 10:44 AM


" Time For Sleep "

I sit here eyes wide
Tiredness creeps upon
My awake state
Bed is calling
My pillow Soft
Dreams waiting
For me to dream
My eyes are heavy
Closing on me
I cannot keep aware
They're in a stare
My mind is full
Of wonder from all
As I drift into a sleep
So deep into a daze
I see no longer
As here I lay my head
To awake to a better day
With happier feel



[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-07-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-07 11:16 AM


A good night's sleep always makes me feel better too! A beautiful poem, Whiskey! As usual!  

 Denise


whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-07 06:53 PM


Thankyou for replying Denise your a lovely Person  
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 2000-01-07 07:18 PM


Your incredible!
I invision you walk
around all day
with poems just
flowing out your mouth
constantly.
So keep on talking.
           Paul

whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-07 07:49 PM


Paul , I dont know about incredible but thanks , and youd be right just latley I have been walking around with poems mixing in my mind  

Julie

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-07 08:39 PM


Enjoyed the read Wishey, This one was a little differant.
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