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whiskey
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" Tell Me "

Tell Me what it is I need to hear
Tell me that you'll always be near
You see I am afriad of whats above
You see I am afraid to be loved

Tell me what it is I need
Tell me what my self will feed
You see I am scared To know
You see I am scared you'll go

Tell me what it is I feel
Tell me why I feel unreal
You see I am frightened of life
You see I am frigtened of Strife

Tell me what it is I think
Tell me of my missing link
You see I am terrified of you
You see I am terrified of feeling blue

Tell me what it is I see
Tell me the way that I should be
You see I fear things unseen
You see I fear things mean



[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-07-2000).]
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Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-07-2000 08:52 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

   Whiskeysin the house,
    another good poem,
although it concerns me,
I hope everything is alright!
     A Little Concern,
         Paul
whiskey
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2 posted 01-07-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Paul, I am fine just a little down Thanks for your concern  

Julie
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3 posted 01-07-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Wonderful read. I hope you are feeling better now. Life can be a scary thing, but you have friends here. Thanks for sharing with us. ((((HUGS))))

 B Gravitt

whiskey
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4 posted 01-07-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Betty   I will be fine just a sad day today for me
littleJas
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5 posted 01-07-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

This is concerning to me too , but I see you said you are ok so that makes me feel ok about it , Great poem  
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Whiskey,
I will say only two things, first you have talent and second a very old saying.
Smile and the world smiles with you. *L* Sy
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7 posted 01-07-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you LittleJas and Sy for your touching replies  
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Wow Whiskey - great poem! I can relate to this. I hope that you're OK though : )
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A good poem!!!!!!
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Thank you Moonshine and Vandana and moonshine I am fine just had a bad day  
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11 posted 01-09-2000 03:08 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Well.......here's a (((((((hug))))))) anyway - I know all about bad days.......lol Glad to hear that you are well : )
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Thanks Moonshine Hugs back  
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