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Seymour Tabin
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    The ever more of you

We are not strangers you and I,
There is a covert pregnant tie.
A feeling deep within the soul,
Like the sensing of a similar goal.

I feel we've met before you know,
Many times long, long ago.
Those times we sort each other out,
Even the times of turn about.

Today, you show to me this face.
But yet much more do I embrace.
Within you lies the zeal, appeal,
The very unction of the real.

It's the weakness of the human will,
That make me probe you closer still.
I look beyond this face to see
And you in turn do that to me.

Sometimes a husband or a wife.
Sometimes a Venus of a life
Perhaps it is the other way.
To this I say the eyes see clay.

We seek the evermore of true.
And this I've found again in you.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 01-06-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

"look beyond the eyes", so beautiful Sy.  What a gift you have dear man.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-06-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Dear Sy,
The wonder you create I see
This poem of beauteous verse is you
But the beauty of the poetry
Most certain dwells within the true
You are amazing
Love ya,
Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-06-2000).]
Pepper
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This is gorgeous Sy....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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4 posted 01-06-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is so Beautiful Sy, Its wonderful  
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5 posted 01-06-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Sy.... you do have a way of touching the very soul. "I look beyond this face to see, and you in turn do that to me"  Beautiful my fiend, beautiful.

 B Gravitt


Seymour Tabin
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Martie,
We are all seeking beyond our eyes. *L*
Elizabeth,
This is a little of what I've been trying to say, there is much more. Love you Sy
Pepper,
All the secrets of the universe are within us.
*L* Sy
Whiskey,
Thank you my dear, you have a large soul.
Betty,
Your beauty lies beyond the mirror. thank you
Sy
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7 posted 01-06-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful..you do indeed possess quite a gift, Sy.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


Seymour Tabin
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Alwaye,
You do say the nicest things. *L* sy
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9 posted 01-06-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well done, Sy. Now go over and check out Q&A!
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"The very unction of the real"

This poem, so tender in its offering, makes me smile. How can it not embrace, in dear and emollient phrases, your love's heart and soul?

Dear LadyClaire

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11 posted 01-06-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Well Sy, we can't ever say you lack for talent dear man!  Beautiful!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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12 posted 01-06-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This made me think of one of my favorite movies,'Somewhere in Time'. So deeply romantic! I think I would have to say this is my favorite of yours, so far!

 Denise

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13 posted 01-06-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Well, looks like I replied a bit late and all the GOOD responses were taken! I will simply respond with the words "touchingly beautiful".

Elizabeth

 "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke
Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."


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Sy - it is so nice to put a face to the name - you look nothing like Oscar!!! LOL

This, my friend, is a delight. Expressive, sincere and moving. A gift indeed.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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You are romancing the soul again, dear Sy!  Thank you!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
I'll have to agree with all of the above
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 01-07-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
Had lots of fun with the picture, I don't know why but everyone guessed. Thanks for the good on the poem.
Meadow,
Beautiful words, thank you.
Devina,
Thanks for the beautiful.
Denise,
Yes somewhere in time, beautiful. *L* Sy
Elizabeth,
Thank you for the read and comment.
Severn,
A beautiful comment, thank you. *L* Sy
Sunshine,
Romancing the soul is my thing, thank you. *L* Sy
Nan
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18 posted 01-08-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, indeed, Sy....
'Tis a phenomenon - how our minds connect here, isn't it?.. I like this one lots..
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Your poem was so romantic that it touched my heart.
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 01-08-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Thank you, you are a sweetheart. *L* Sy
Quick,
My thanks to you for the nice comment.
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21 posted 01-08-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

What a delight to read!!! This is beautiful, Seymour... well done!
 
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