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manalive325
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since 1999-12-15
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0 posted 2000-01-06 06:01 PM


Mind Mingling

Words sculptured, shaped to feed senses and passions.
Thoughts intertwine, dance and tangle in steamy fashion.

Unknown minds in random meetings intermingle in steamy seethings.
A phrase is turned, desire expressed, arousal buoyed, imagining fleeting.

Can one find in all this chatter something real, that really matters?
Is this play or serious matter? Ingenious techies or mad hatters?

The software of the mind is creating. It can make one warm and leave one tingling.
Thought meeting thought through word smithing. This amazing place of mind mingling.

By Walter J. Sackett 1/'2000



© Copyright 2000 Walter J. Sackett - All Rights Reserved
Deborah
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since 2000-01-03
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1 posted 2000-01-06 06:19 PM


Interesting thoughts portrayed in this poem.  
       Deborah

whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-06 08:32 PM


I agree with Deborah, this is very interesting
Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-06 10:12 PM


I enjoyed reading this. Interesting thoughts and questions. I think as in the rest of life you will find both the 'serious' and the 'players'. And I believe caution is prudent. Again, I liked this very much!

 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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4 posted 2000-01-06 10:14 PM


Wow Walt...very nice to see you back here!!! I absolutely love the flow to this one. The rhythm dances  
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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5 posted 2000-01-06 11:15 PM



Minds mingling...words stringling ... This one makes me smile.

Dear LadyClaire


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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6 posted 2000-01-07 08:33 AM


Wow - this is intriguing.

Big thumbs up from me.



 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

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