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Mind Mingling

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manalive325
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Mind Mingling

Words sculptured, shaped to feed senses and passions.
Thoughts intertwine, dance and tangle in steamy fashion.

Unknown minds in random meetings intermingle in steamy seethings.
A phrase is turned, desire expressed, arousal buoyed, imagining fleeting.

Can one find in all this chatter something real, that really matters?
Is this play or serious matter? Ingenious techies or mad hatters?

The software of the mind is creating. It can make one warm and leave one tingling.
Thought meeting thought through word smithing. This amazing place of mind mingling.

By Walter J. Sackett 1/'2000


© Copyright 2000 Walter J. Sackett - All Rights Reserved
Deborah
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Interesting thoughts portrayed in this poem.  
       Deborah
whiskey
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I agree with Deborah, this is very interesting
Denise
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I enjoyed reading this. Interesting thoughts and questions. I think as in the rest of life you will find both the 'serious' and the 'players'. And I believe caution is prudent. Again, I liked this very much!

 Denise

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Wow Walt...very nice to see you back here!!! I absolutely love the flow to this one. The rhythm dances  
Meadowmuse
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Minds mingling...words stringling ... This one makes me smile.

Dear LadyClaire

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Wow - this is intriguing.

Big thumbs up from me.



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