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Kevin Taylor
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0 posted 01-06-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

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You were 16
When I met you.
(When poetry was still a promise - God, the promises we made!
And made again when we came back to words.)

You were 16
When I met you
And I was 25.



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1 posted 01-06-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

So what's the rest of the story???? Just wondering what your decision was and all....

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3 posted 01-09-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

The first stanza is wonderful... I , too, would like to know the rest of the story! LOL... you definitely have a way of painting a picture with your words and intriguing your audience. Thanks for posting this.
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