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Life (a poem by my son)

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Corinne
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state of confusion


0 posted 01-06-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Note:  this was my son's Christmas present to me, knowing how much I love poetry!  Sweet kid, huh?

Life

A golden, wild happy feeling in life
You have to go from the bottom,
To the top of the ceiling.

The water is taken from a creek
That supports lives in a weary peek at the future.
It is a battle to stay alive, you might have to take a peek at a beehive.

One day a deer came up to me, but after a few seconds it decided to flee.
That is how animals react, I hope you can pay attention to that.

1999 Jonathon  (age 8, unedited)



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 01-06-2000).]
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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 01-06-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Wow, Corinne - he's a chip off the old block.  His style shows us all the life you gave him.  I guess some people do live forever, don't they?
Denise
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2 posted 01-06-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

How sweet, Corinne! Another poet in the wings!  

 Denise

Deborah
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3 posted 01-06-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

What a cute poem and special present to get.  It's nice to know there are some young poets out there.
       Deborah
Corinne
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4 posted 01-06-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thanks Michael, Denise and Deborah!  Best present I ever got!


Corinne
 
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