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Awake Again

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whiskey
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" Awake Again "

One Glance
Seen within
All the hurt
All the sin
Out of Self
Scared Inside
No where to run
No where to hide
Rattled trees
Howling moon
Stars beaming
Running lost
Dont look behind
Screaming voice
No-one can hear
Silent fear
Eyes wide
Strong sense
Ears open
Hair stands
Demon seen
Heart races
Blood flows
Legs stiff
No where to stay
No where to go
Dreams ends
Awake again

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-06-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

   There you go !
      You've done it again,
         though now a little scared,
           still your poetry friend!
        
               Paul
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2 posted 01-06-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Paul sorry to scare you  
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3 posted 01-06-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

The terror of REM paralysis put into verse....

My applause..... (tips hat)
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This is fantastic, Whiskey! Excellent verse!

 Denise

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Whiskey,
Very good! You are so talented!
Tamera
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Thank you to  everyone for your kind replies  
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I like this , very good  
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