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Moonshine
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0 posted 01-06-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

I miss the way you touch me,
And i miss the way you smile,
I miss the warmth of your embrace,
And i miss your deep dark eyes,
Why cant we see each other?
Is how im feeling wrong?
I knew it wasn't gonna be forever,
But we werent together long,
I want to run to you,
And fall into your arms,
I want to kiss you just once more,
So that my restlessness can calm,
But you feel so very distant,
Like you've pulled right back from me,
I so wish that things were different,
Because i miss you terribly.
© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-06-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very sad indeed.

Been there!

K
Moonshine
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2 posted 01-06-2000 05:16 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Severn,
Things are OK now though : )
Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-06-2000 08:01 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, this is really beautiful and sad, but beautiful.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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4 posted 01-06-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply DA,
I appreciate and value your comments hon : )
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-06-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Awwww Hun, sounds like you are missing someone very much. I am sorry to here that. ((((HUGS))))
Moonshine
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6 posted 01-06-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your comment Hoot,
Yes, when I wrote that poem I was missing someone terribly but things are different now and I don't miss that person so much cause they are in my life again as a friend.
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