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Unconditional.......( A happy poem)

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Moonshine
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For Chasca.......(my dog lol)

Your deep brown eyes,
Stare so intently at me,
And I feel all of your love,
I know its into my soul that you see,
You understand all that I am,
And all that I might be,
You're always there,
Whenever I am in need,
Of a sympathetic heart,
Or even just a hug,
No matter what transpires,
I know I'll always have your love,
Through good times and bad,
And through dark and light,
When I feel safe and secure,
And times when my heart takes flight,
Because you are so very special,
You are an angel to me,
I'll love you till the end of time,
Cause you'll always be a part of me.
© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-06-2000 04:56 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is very sweet moonshine - glad you have such a friend!  

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply Severn,
Yup - Chasca ( my dog lol) is a great friend. I luv her lots!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-06-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine this is a  wonderful poem, give Chasca a hug for me  ok  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply DA,
It means a lot to me. Yep sure! I'll give her a great big hug for you : )
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Wonderful poem Moonshine , Dogs are great friends , My dog is my best friend , give Chasca A hug from me too  

Nan
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Nicely done - and the title is perfect too...
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply Whiskey,
Yup Chasca is my best friend - she has been for a long time now. I will certainly give her a big hug for you : ) She sleeps on my bed next to me so I will give her one when I get into bed.
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Nan : ) Yep, I thought that unconditional would be a very fitting title cause Chasca does love me unconditionally ( probably cause I feed her lol)
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Great poem, Moonshine....dogs are great that way, aren't they?!  

 Denise

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I understand so well the love of your bestfriend! Great poem!
Tamera
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply dsnyder,
Yup - dogs are great that way! Chasca is awesome! Thanx for your comment.
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Tamera!
CrazyChick
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13 posted 01-07-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Great poem. I have a dog myself, they're great pets!
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply and lovely comment CrazyChick! Yes - they are awesome pets!
Nate Dogg
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15 posted 01-07-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem Moonshine! I can feel your happiness in this poem. And I love dogs too. I have a black laborador retriever named gypsy. And I love her too!

 Nathan
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I really enjoyed your poem Moonshine!  
My little dog Cedric, is my heart!!!
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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Thanx for your reply Nathan,
Yeah - I've been through some stressful times lately and Chasca ( cattle dog X cattle dog) was there with me. It's so amazing how animals just know.......
WOW - a black lab! I love labs.
Moonshine
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Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Pepper : )
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Aren't pets wonderful
Moonshine
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Yep pets are awesome! Chasca is the only person ( yes person lol) that I trust totally lol
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