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A Brilliant Star!!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-06-2000 02:42 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Your dreamy eyes
Sparkle like brilliant diamonds
Projecting
colours of the Rainbow
way up high into the skies
In my eye's
You are an Angel
Floating
a few feet higher
Than anyone around you
Your Skin
gleems in the sunlight
Longing and Needing
to touch it
I look upon you
in disbelief
An Aura surrounds you
Of Radiant
Orange and Gold
Your beauty beckons me.
This Moment
My heart will always hold
You smile at me Gracefully
and I see a Star
A Brilliant Star!



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-06-2000 02:46 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Beautiful poem   I like it
Moonshine
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2 posted 01-06-2000 02:51 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

This is beatiful DA - well done. Like the title of the poem, it is a brilliant star!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-06-2000 03:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is really beautiful DA. It flows nicely and projects a great picture
Dark Angel
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4 posted 01-06-2000 03:29 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Whiskey, thank youglad you like it  
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Moonshine, Thank you honey for your lovely comment.  
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Thank you Ruth, your comments always mean so much to me  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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5 posted 01-06-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is lovely - illuminating!  

Good writing there fellow Downunder girl.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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6 posted 01-06-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis a wondrously well written verse soul-sib. Peace be with you my frirnd.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


Nan
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7 posted 01-06-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

A poem that shines light upon darkness is a wonderful one indeed...
Denise
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8 posted 01-06-2000 12:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Dark Angel! Simply beautiful!

 Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 01-06-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This just sparkles, Dark Angel
Just like you do
I love the love behind your poetry
Liz
Dark Angel
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10 posted 01-06-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Severn,Soul-Brother,Nan Denise and Elizabeth, Thank you all so very much for your kind and lovely comments. *hugs*  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Poet deVine
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11 posted 01-06-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Softly elegant! Beautiful! I like this a lot...  
Dark Angel
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12 posted 01-06-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon,Thank you so very much   glad you liked it  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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13 posted 01-07-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow DA!  This was beautiful! Excellent job!

 <*\\\><    
Where there is faith,
           there is love.
Where there is love,
          there is peace.
Where there is peace,
            there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
        there is no need.

Hallmark




[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 01-07-2000).]
Dark Angel
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14 posted 01-07-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel, Thanks so much for your lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it. I love the little Angel, so cute, thanks Hon! *hugs*    

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




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Betty Gravitt
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15 posted 01-07-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Wow... beautiful Dark Angel. I like this so very much. Simply beautiful.  

 B Gravitt

Dark Angel
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16 posted 01-07-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Betty, Thank you so very much, glad you like it!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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