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CrazyChick
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0 posted 01-06-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick


              Please come back

I scream out your name
but your not there
you've been gone for some time now
but i just now see
how much i need and want you in my life

I want to have the chance to apologize
I want to tell you how much I love you
I want to tell you what a great friend you were to me
I want you to know how much you meant to me
and how you made me become a better person inside
I just want the chance to say goodbye
I just want one more day

I miss you so much!
© Copyright 2000 CrazyChick - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-06-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem , Welcome to passions  
devina
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2 posted 01-06-2000 02:42 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome to passions, you've got some great thoughts here, just a suggestion, this would read more smoothly if you rearranged em a bit. Point taken none the less!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Bojopy
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3 posted 01-06-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

Welcome to passions!! Missing someone is the worst feeling in the world but talking about it is the best thing.  At least that is what I have learned.  You found a home here!!!1
CrazyChick
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4 posted 01-06-2000 02:57 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you everyone!    this is one of my first poems so i was a little nervous about it   )
Severn
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5 posted 01-06-2000 04:58 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

It is quite a scary thing posting one of your first poems...I still remember mine! This is great - and welcome to our family...

    

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
Moonshine
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6 posted 01-06-2000 05:49 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Great poem Crazy Chick!
You express yourse;f very well : )
Paul Hoekman
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7 posted 01-06-2000 08:15 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

You don't seem all that crazy to me!
but if YOU do you are in the right place
and WECOME ! !
                  Paul
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8 posted 01-06-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

When I lost my mother I learned, the hard way, that we can never count on having a tomorrow... and unsaid words can haunt us as much as words hurled in anger and later regretted. Well done... and welcome!
CrazyChick
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9 posted 01-07-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you everyone!
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