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Hide amongst the shadows
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Hide amongst the shadows |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Hide amongst the shadows find some shelter in your tears go ahead and play the victim you don’t have to face your fears Hide amongst the shadows to your heart speak only lies Take comfort in this masquerade of merciless disguise Hide amongst the shadows why cause yourself the pain wallow in the water cold of self inflicted rain. Hide amongst the shadows Let the clouds fake your despair but don’t expect to find the warmth of a sun that’s never there. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hi, Kevin. Just wanted to say I enjoyed the poem, especially the phrases "water cold" and "clouds to hide your despair." I'll have to look for more of your stuff. Keep a sense of humor!  Mike |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this one Kev....wise wourds for one who still has much to live |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Great flow here, keep em comin hun! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
wonderful poem!!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Kevin, This is great , I enjoyed reading it alot |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kevin, this piece is lovely...especially when read aloud. I especially like the lines "Take comfort in this masquerade of merciless disguise" and "wallow in the water cold of self inflicted rain." Nicely done.  Claire |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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