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Gemini
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0 posted 01-05-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gemini

Can't sleep.
In too deep.
Thoughts of you.
Leaving my mind askew.
Words we shared.
Glances, we cared?
Told you I loved you right out loud.
Was nothing that made me feel very proud.
I know I scared you,
(I scared myself too)
Riding on a high, shot down so low.
Not knowing which way to go.
I'm feeling more emotions than I ever knew I had.
My lifes thrown off course, can't seem to feel glad.
You said I damaged our relationship by speaking the honesty of...
How else could I have told you, I found a friend and fell in love?
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Nan
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1 posted 01-06-2000 07:59 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome to life's merry-go-round of love..... Isn't it special?... You've certainly captured it..
CrazyChick
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you expressed yourself well...great job   )
whiskey
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3 posted 01-07-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem , Love can be so confusing , but I think its better to tell the truth  
Gemini
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4 posted 01-07-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Nan, CrazyChick, whiskey:  Thank you for kind words, understanding and support.
 
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