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Gemini
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0 posted 2000-01-05 11:31 PM


Can't sleep.
In too deep.
Thoughts of you.
Leaving my mind askew.
Words we shared.
Glances, we cared?
Told you I loved you right out loud.
Was nothing that made me feel very proud.
I know I scared you,
(I scared myself too)
Riding on a high, shot down so low.
Not knowing which way to go.
I'm feeling more emotions than I ever knew I had.
My lifes thrown off course, can't seem to feel glad.
You said I damaged our relationship by speaking the honesty of...
How else could I have told you, I found a friend and fell in love?

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Nan
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1 posted 2000-01-06 07:59 AM


Welcome to life's merry-go-round of love..... Isn't it special?... You've certainly captured it..
CrazyChick
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2 posted 2000-01-07 02:09 AM


you expressed yourself well...great job   )
whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-07 02:16 AM


Wonderful poem , Love can be so confusing , but I think its better to tell the truth  
Gemini
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4 posted 2000-01-07 10:53 PM


Nan, CrazyChick, whiskey:  Thank you for kind words, understanding and support.
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