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Wilted Rose

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Unknown Poet
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0 posted 01-05-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Unknown Poet   Email Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Unknown Poet

Wilted Rose

I once had a rose
to beautiful to forget
that rose always glowed
until I had to pick it

Now that rose is fading
slowly going into my past
but my memory keeps on waning
until that rose turns to ash

I struggle for forgivness
for I made a bad mistake
that rose no longer wants me
for it seems that cruel is fate

© Copyright 2000 Thomas - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 01-05-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

If we could only undo the things we do sometimes......lovely poem.
tulip
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2 posted 01-05-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Sometimes all it takes is an apology, have you tried?  Good luck!
Denise
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3 posted 01-05-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions! Sad poem  

 Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-05-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to Passions
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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5 posted 01-06-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Welcome to passions.  Nice poem.  Looking forward to reading more.
devina
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6 posted 01-06-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Pretty poem, and I love the meaning behind!  Welcome to Passions!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Severn
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7 posted 01-06-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is sad indeed, Unknown - Welcome to Passions. Mistakes can be remedied...

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
whiskey
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8 posted 01-06-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Sad poem, well all make mistakes and sometimes sorry is the hardest thing to say ,
welcome  
Nan
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9 posted 01-06-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome, Unknown Poet.... as distiinguished from "The Unknown Poet" who lurks among us as well.....
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on the threshold of a dream


10 posted 01-06-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Welcome!!
Unknown Poet
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Sumner Washington


11 posted 01-06-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Unknown Poet   Email Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Unknown Poet

Thanks everyone! This was my first time letting the public see one of my poems and I was kind of nervous. Glad you liked it though!
Betty Gravitt
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12 posted 01-06-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

"Time can not be bought back with silver and gold," favorite words of a song. Treasure all the time you have Unkown Poet, for it surley slips away. Beautiful,just beautiful.  Have you said "I am sorry". Sometimes the simple little things works best.  


 B Gravitt


 
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