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Jer
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0 posted 01-05-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Jer   Email Jer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jer

Randomly I write
Bound in boundless chains
Lost maybe
But I see where I'm going in life
Not all can see
Vision is not my strength
Surely it is your stength?
I am not making sence
But I am not confused
I write to let these words form
If they were not formed
What will they do?
Will they restrain
My random babblings?
I think not.
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I know how you feel, Jer!  

 Denise

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There's one good thing, you know where you're going in life, and that's something not a lot have a view of! Your poem is good also!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Nate Dogg
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You explained clear enough to me even though they really rhyme. Good job and continue to write the way that you want, as long as it satisfies you.

 Nathan
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